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If this is all you can see
All you can bind
All you can free
It doesn’t mean you’re behind

If this is all you can say
All you can shout
All you can lay
It doesn’t mean you’re out

If this is all you can cry
All you can run
All you can defy
It doesn’t mean you’re done

If this is all you can see
All you can state
All you can believe
It doesn’t mean you’re late
©2008-2010 ~Heerenveen
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Author's Comments

this is mostly experimental, but carries a general message nonetheless. next poem will be direct again maybe.

i'd leave a snazzy comment about how the euro 08 feels foreign unlike past tournaments have or about other things but it's so very late and i'm tired so good night. have a good week.

Edit: I guess I owe you a proper description, a less tired entry too.

The poem is talking about when you dwell about things and refuse to accept you can go any further. I wish had decided to work on the words a bit more, to make up for the repetitive tone of the language.

Now I'm wondering who wrote the screenplay for The Golden Compass. I want my money BACK.

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